I think of all I could have been
then look at what I am
remembering with sorrow when
I didn’t give a damn
so many people tried to help
though I just turned away
a cocky unrepentant whelp
determined not to pay,
and now I turn my pockets out
divulging all my shares
but like the me that used to pout
nobody really cares.
Are You Reading Me?
Such true words, and such a hard but hopefull place...if we could only know then what we know now....I think this one is one of my favorites of your poetry. :-)
ReplyDeletelovely done,
ReplyDeletewe all do that,
things will improve if you, you make adjustment yourself.
;)
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ReplyDeletewelcome for a visit,
:)
Hi Carrie, yes hope is important (as implied by your blog title) thanks, I'm glad you like it :)
ReplyDeleteHi Jingle, yes well self improvement is a never ending process so I'll just keep trying my best. I'll check it out ;)
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ReplyDeletetwo award for you.
"but like the me that used to pout
ReplyDeletenobody really cares."
Simply fantastic...!
Good verbiage like always :)
Regards,
Dimps
Hi Jingle thanks a lot!!
ReplyDeleteHey Dimps, well I try to keep the verbiage consistent.
Good post and this post helped me alot in my college assignement. Thanks you seeking your information.
ReplyDeleteHey anon, let me know what grade you get and if this is spam I hope you get festering pustules in your genital area :)
ReplyDeleteBest thing about it the person has realized and that is just about it :)
ReplyDeleteRealization and acceptance can clear the vision .. give you the courage to move forward... can enlightened the dark corners :)
Love
Ritz..
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Thanks Ritz, you are so right.
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