Saturday, August 14, 2010

Smoked

Promethean pretenses prance upon a plainly plebeian page too delineated to deftly dance or awaken an atomic age irradiated beyond repair by fallout from the flame affair.
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4 comments:

  1. Dimple3:52 AM

    Hey :)

    Howdy?? :)

    Nice -- "too delineated to deftly dance"

    Regards,
    Dimps

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  2. rch11:16 AM

    Howdy pard, thanks much ;)

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  3. Lynette Killam10:48 AM

    Love the alliteration..very clever! And thanks for leaving your comment on my lion haiku...It started my day off with a grin, always a good thing!!

    Lynette

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  4. rch5:23 AM

    Hi Lynette, thanks you're the only one that commented on that aspect of it, I just love similar sounds :)

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