Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Relative

The bulk of the strife
beneath which I smother
was caused by another
I’ve met in this life

if it wasn’t for others
our lives would be calm
with just one qualm—
no sisters or brothers.
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5 comments:

  1. Lisa Ursu12:24 PM

    I really felt this piece.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  2. be not blind1:04 PM

    Hmm, so true. Good work.

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  3. Carrie Van Horn1:39 PM

    I can relate...:-)

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  4. rch11:29 AM

    Hi Liza, you're welcome ;)

    Hi bnb, where you been?

    Hi Carrie, nice one :D

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  5. Dimple8:59 PM

    Hello Bob,

    Nice rhyming pattern!
    Good work as well...

    Regards,
    Dimps

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