It’s just another rock we pass
in flight around this ball of gas
but when the Sun’s prodigious light
hits our distant neighbor right
a regal glow transforms the sky
and etches dreams upon the eye
of any that are sensitive
to understanding why we live
and how we can extend this race
beyond the realms of time and space.
Hello Bob,
ReplyDeleteIt is a real nice sketch!
Catchy lines --
"a regal glow transforms the sky
and etches dreams upon the eye"
:)
Regards,
Dimps
Hi Bob,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this ... nice rythm and some strong lines!
How's Bell Bottom Blues coming?
Best wishes!
Hi dimps I 'see' what you mean ;)
ReplyDeleteHi Fenny, it's getting there :D