Raucous crows command the morning
crying their collective caw
as we approach the barren slumber.
Skies grow dim with little warning
darker than a demon’s maw
as raucous crows command the morning
coming back in greater number
than the old ones ever saw,
an omen of the barren slumber.
Blaring blue-black fruit adorning
trees will rub your senses raw,
when raucous crows command the morning
bending branches they encumber,
clamoring with beak and claw
to usher in the barren slumber.
Their harsh reports are ever scorning
order, for they loathe the law;
if raucous crows command the mourning,
so begins the barren slumber.
very nice meter going on here. i think the repetition works very well also.
ReplyDeleteHello Bob,
ReplyDeleteNice subject & last four lines are great!
Regards,
Dimple
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hey thanks gerry!
ReplyDeletehi dimps, thanks to you also.