Monday, December 21, 2009

Salvation

Annoyingly the jingling resounds
as tawdry as the tinsel that abounds
but oh the warmth that loosens every knot
each time I drop some change into that pot
for maybe this old rogue still has a shot.

6 comments:

  1. Hello Bob,

    Your composition is F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C
    Your concepts, ideas and writing skills are simply out of the box!

    Regards,
    Dimple
    http://poemshub.blogspot.com

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  2. Nailed it. Well done!

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  3. Anonymous5:11 AM

    Brim over I acquiesce in but I contemplate the post should secure more info then it has.

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  4. Hey Dimps I have one question - will you be my agent?

    Hi Gerry, thanks.

    Anonymous I only have one thing to say - HUH?!?

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  5. Anonymous7:53 PM

    Again a good post. Thank your also pen-friend

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  6. well thanks anon

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