Tuesday, September 08, 2009

Zoning

The spiral down is quicker
with a shot or two of liquor
and things won’t seem so rough
once you’ve had a little puff—

don’t wallow in confusion
just accept the big illusion
and if you’ve had your fill
take another happy pill.
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6 comments:

  1. Dimple7:39 AM

    Magnificent :)
    Beautifully written & nice rhythm :-)

    Regards,
    Dimple
    http://poemshub.blogspot.com

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  2. Noah the Great10:08 AM

    Most of my family has fallen into the pitfalls of alcoholism/drug use.

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  3. Shirley9:49 AM

    OK. Just took another happy pill. I'll let ya know when it kicks in! ;)

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  4. rch5:07 AM

    Heya dimps thanx!

    Hi Noah, I'm right with ya.

    Shirley it's not nice if you don't share ;)

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  5. Word Catalyst Magazine9:55 AM

    Sorry. It's in the mail!

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  6. S.L. Corsua11:48 AM

    I need a liquor or two of shots m'self... Er. What'd I just shay?

    It's the happy pill talking. (grin)

    And oh the puff, sometimes I miss the puff (I've quit it for almost a year now).

    Cheers.

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