Some people label thoughts a poem
because they used a form
fastidiously fashioning the flanks
so perfectly it shines like chrome
and feels about as warm—
you can’t forge art by filling in the blanks.
Are You Reading Me?
Are You Reading Me?
nice one! I do like to use a form of poetry but you need free flowing words also.
ReplyDeleteThis one felt rather tense compared to your other poems. I don't know if it was just my mind stumbling, though.
ReplyDeletethanks guys
ReplyDeleteps Noah I was having a bad day and was very tense when I wrote it.