Saturday, January 24, 2009

Bitten

The musty and primeval spoor
that comes from deepest growth
inveigles me to linger like the moss
but I have made a binding oath
and will tarry here no more
for someone may be saddened by the loss—

forsaking Eden’s lush embrace
to don eternal gold
I hear the roaming creatures smugly jeer,
though later when the night is cold
I’ll revel in the grace
of sweeter flesh than any sacred sphere.

3 comments:

  1. Its the most original thing I've read for a long time!

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  2. hi Noah, ha ha enjoyable!

    hi Nick, thanks that really means something to me! :D

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