Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Seclusion

Beneath the helm
there lies a realm
of one, who like a crooked elm
discreetly brims
with wooden whims
extending gnarly naked limbs
that long to touch
but only clutch
the remnants of a faulty crutch
and can’t achieve
the least reprieve
so log about the lust to leave.

4 comments:

  1. Anonymous8:51 AM

    Just reach out and you are bound to touch someone. ;) This is a very moving poem.

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  2. you made me think of that song -I'll Be There :D

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  3. Hold on to that thought and yes, I'll be there...hopefully not alone. :)

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  4. Rhyme and rhythm meets and makes harmony in this piece; the stops are just right, I pause where I breathe. :) Cheers.

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