Wednesday, March 05, 2008

Cultured

Narcissus is certain
her helix ingrains
the rosiest tulips
the garden contains

but lily’s a lady
immune to the plot
who needs not belabor
the something she’s got.
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous5:22 PM

    Intelligent use of vocabulary and a good message. Always a pleasure.

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  2. ekhosama6:20 PM

    Hey u said one of ur favorite poems is sunlight on the garden.. Me too. I only have three poems using that rhyme scheme and one of them is called GEAR SHIFT. Check it out in my blog and tell me what u think.

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  3. Anonymous5:13 AM

    Hi Bob,
    Very well put. Simple and to the point. You do know your flowers don't you? I'm impressed!
    Shirley

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  4. ozymandiaz5:24 AM

    I'd be a blooming idiot not to like this...
    get it?
    "BLOOOOOMING" idiot
    jeeze i crack myself up

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  5. rch11:21 AM

    Noah likewise :)

    Yo ekho, I will check it as soon as I can.

    Hi Shirl, what can I say?

    Oz, lmao

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  6. Word Catalyst Magazine11:35 AM

    Yea Oz, that was a good one! Jeez, you crack me up too. :)

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  7. CANDLELIZARDEGG7:04 PM

    i love the choice of words,

    i love the radiance of a flower garden

    bringing me back to an old experience
    on a park....

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