A river has no enemies
and likewise, no true friends
although it’s quite a mover
in regard to current trends,
reacting to a rocky bed
by gouging graceful bends—
obsessed with finding distant seas
towards which it ever wends.
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ooohhhh that was clever... very clever and very well written...
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I have to agree with Paisley…very clever and well written.
ReplyDeleteAh, water, so ambiguous yet spiritual. Me thinks this be one of your best sir. It carries your trademark brevity and wryness. Kudos.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the flow of comments, oooh that really was bad ;)
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