I frequently fret
as fingers forget
the key to compelling expression
but sometimes the scales
tear off weighty wails
which prompts me to voice this confession,
for on those rare nights
that deftness ignites
my chops with harmonic persuasion
I know it’s a gift
from across the great rift,
a melodically mystic occasion.
If you have half the rhythm in your chops that you have in your rhymes, I doubt your fingers are too far a-fret.
ReplyDelete"a gift from across the great rift"... great line!
Wonderful! :D
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteWe should all be so gifted. You should put your songs back on your site. You certainly have nothing to fret about!:)
Shirl
Very interesting interpretation of magic. I enjoyed reading a few more of your posts while I was here.
ReplyDeleteA truly clever and rhythmic tribute to magic and fretting! Melodic and mystical, for sure!
ReplyDeletei smell something like a guitarists stuff ey...
ReplyDeletejust like me...
say, what music do you play bob?
Mysticism must have rhythm. It has always been associated with music. And this definitely had it.
ReplyDeleteStrum that string again and cast a magic spell. Your words are music that spell magic in itself.
ReplyDeleteI wish you well.
~ Jeques
That was quite nice.
ReplyDeletea gift from a rift
ReplyDeletelove it
is this a way of saying your muse is from the other side of the tracks?
Hi bubba, thanks, tell my fingers that.
ReplyDeleteHi pepe, thanks :)
Shirley if only you knew.
Hey there you are cricket, I knew I heard some chirping, thanks and come back often.
Hi tumble, thanks a million.
Hey Gerald, I love classic rock.
Hi anthony, you're too kind.
Welcome jeques and thanks.
Much obliged Noah.
And last but certainly not least ozmo, yes you could say that ;)
is it the rarity that makes the magic... beautifully written
ReplyDeleteand i should say you were in very fine voice today...
ReplyDeletei like the rhyming pattern. i like how you interpreted magic here.
ReplyDeleteNicely done, a good laugh on top of it. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot you guys! :)
ReplyDeleteVery lyrical! I like it.
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