Monday, February 18, 2008

Stinker

At the peak
of a week
without bathing
the reek
will be scathing

so

frequently scrub
in the tub
or they’ll name you
a grub
and defame you.

10 comments:

  1. Anonymous9:16 AM

    Ha! It's pretty bad when you have to tell the little stinker that they're a little stinky!

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  2. I hate it when that happens...

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  3. §orry I know it's a stinker, but this one was stuck in my brain.

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  4. Anonymous5:35 PM

    a bit lengthy, but, I couldn't help it: I liked it. Mary from Meander With Me Average Poet? What's wrong with that? Takes one to know one?

    http://maryakaufman.wordpress.com

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  5. Anonymous6:13 PM

    It's better to hear that you stink from a friend than someone you admire!

    I hate when that happens.

    I'm glad I smell good sans when I'm sick.

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  6. i dont want to be defamed bob..
    ^_^

    so ill overtime on the tub

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  7. If I were to go a week without bathing I would be lucky to be called a grub...
    Very fun read.

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  8. ha ha just having some good clean fun, awwww that was bad

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  9. dang, that was good. Where did u learn to write poetry?

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  10. it's been a long road ekhosama, thanks a lot.

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