My footing failed on icy tracks that coated the cement
I had to put some effort into every increment
expending energy that heretofore had no intent
and now I’m feeling less inclined to be inclement.
Are You Reading Me?
Are You Reading Me?
Sometimes, I feel like giving up, too.
ReplyDeleteIt's beautiful.
As long as you didn't fall on your face it sounds like a good thing to me. btw, thanks for the advice but the static didn't work.;) I'll keep trying!
ReplyDeletehehehe, im happy you noticed my poem, its really not intended for laughter.., ^_^
ReplyDeleteits weird when you live in a world where they cant relate to what you like..
here in our university,
it seems im the only one left behind...
heheheh,,
i dont know if they are ignoramous or something.... but is it right to laugh at a great led zep song Stairway to heaven?
thats what they did to me, hehehe.
i just laugh about the thought..
what are my stuff?
hmmmp./
lets just say, im an oldies geek.
hehehe
i love all the songs of the 50's to 90's
sadly, i dont seem to like the music scene now....
thats all...
gerald
Hey Noah, I'm slowly making it, thanks.
ReplyDeleteHi Shirley, no I made it and do keep trying.
Gerald, I'm sorry I realized the poem was more serious but the title just cracked me up. keep rockin' buddy! :)