A worthy question, I think... perhaps you could expand this and give us the answer? But, even if left rhetorical, and we're abandoned to our own devices, it needs to be posed.
I like the rhythm and the manner in which it cuts to the chase. Plus, the pace is so consistent throughout, it almost sounds like a song.
A worthy question, I think... perhaps you could expand this and give us the answer? But, even if left rhetorical, and we're abandoned to our own devices, it needs to be posed.
ReplyDeleteI like the rhythm and the manner in which it cuts to the chase. Plus, the pace is so consistent throughout, it almost sounds like a song.
Nicely done.
me thinks it would be neat
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but where indeed to find
food for heart and mind
What I first grasped was your double take on the title. I also agree with Bob...perhaps you should consider writing songs. ;)
ReplyDeleteHey bub, thanks man, that's how I started really, with songs.
ReplyDeleteHi Oz, I love it!!
Hello Shirley, I'm working on it, don't worry I'll send you a copy as soon as it's done ;)
Robert, check out http://poeticjustice-dan.blogspot.com/ He's extended "Fare"... a nice tribute to you, I think.
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