Your brassy tone
has been reduced
to just a mousy moan
a flush has shone
for you produced
discordance on your own,
you like to blow
without a mute
to dominate the show
but now you know
your latest toot
was pianissimo.
**Dedicated to Horatio.**
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thanks for the comment sir, thanks for the correction, ill change it as soon as possible., i wrote this sonnet in my deepest appreciation to Shakespeare's Romeo and juliet.
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im really into it sir, i really do, im going to publish my other poem dedicated to the tradgedy., good day bob
Hi Gerald, you're welcome. You have a good day too!
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Ha! Careful, Bob, you're letting your inner musician hang out. I think we all knew this guy...
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