Wednesday, May 30, 2007

The Pits

The fruit of my labor is barely a snack although the exertion is crushing my back perhaps I should nurture that shiny green seed to harvest a bounty beyond what I need.
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5 comments:

  1. ozymandiaz11:35 AM

    Those first two lines are possibly the best I have ever read. The work a day life boiled down into a simple rhyme. Absolutely beautiful.

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  2. rch7:16 AM

    huh, I was just reminding myself to never be greedy, but thanks a lot! 8^D (wish I had something better to write about)

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  3. Anonymous1:21 PM

    huh, I remember someone saying poetry is everywhere, just look. Now who the heck was that guy?

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  4. snomad5:07 AM

    the first line sums up a lot! good stuff

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  5. rch10:23 AM

    thanks nomad (love your name)

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