Friday, March 16, 2007

Keystone

I tried to pick
the proper brick
and stop a messy tumble,
but all I did
was run then skid
into a writhing jumble.

4 comments:

  1. The tone, meter and rhyme scheme all work to make this limeric seeming poem delightful. Well done Bob!

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  2. Hi Russell, thanks so much, I really appreciate that 8^D

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  3. Like a guy at work told me..."the way to really mess up is to try doing something". Now I'm his supervisor. Great.

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  4. Haha that'll teach ya ;)

    Thanks Oz

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