Thursday, June 22, 2006

Foil

Inequity
shall ever be
a point of our existence
the ratio
of pain we know
depends on independence;
a lack of such
and every crutch
will cripple more than carry,
too much of it
and you’ll regret
each comfort that you parry.

4 comments:

  1. Anonymous1:25 PM

    Well, I like it! Rhyme away! It's beautiful.

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  2. Thank you Shirley, you are too kind.

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  3. Anonymous4:37 PM

    No, I'm not that kind, You're that good! :)

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  4. Pleasure and pain, to understand either you must experience the other.

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