tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post3969509814890919779..comments2024-02-20T19:37:39.803-08:00Comments on Average Poet: What We Make Itrchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-79548873283222358642008-03-23T13:03:00.000-07:002008-03-23T13:03:00.000-07:00Bob, this one reminded me about your brother going...Bob, this one reminded me about your brother going to Iraq. I pray things are going well.Danhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13986014894382899336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-3464043013152894362008-03-18T07:34:00.000-07:002008-03-18T07:34:00.000-07:00hi bob, i like the gloom effect of the poem.its li...hi bob, <BR/><BR/>i like the gloom effect of the poem.<BR/>its like someone hates the world. and he is right, has the right.<BR/><BR/>~_^CANDLELIZARDEGGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364506150585826884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-7685615250257377992008-03-17T23:19:00.000-07:002008-03-17T23:19:00.000-07:00This is probably stupid --but when I worked as bi...This is probably stupid --but when I worked as bill clerk in congress and saw the behind the scenes corruption and deceit it disheartened me. A few honest ones in the bunch, but most were sadly caught up in the game. This poem reminds me of that. There's something eerily comforting when you get to the place you realize never existed in this world if that makes sense. it's like sitting back and knowing the answer while everyone else pretends to search for it. AliAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-70143575853736982052008-03-17T13:51:00.000-07:002008-03-17T13:51:00.000-07:00Good evening Bob,the words and the rhythm are bril...Good evening Bob,<BR/>the words and the rhythm are brilliant!Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16688751251396388831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-91910380531029346852008-03-17T09:20:00.000-07:002008-03-17T09:20:00.000-07:00Hi paisley, thanks this one is a little older.Hi paisley, thanks this one is a little older.rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-48386438032898849932008-03-16T18:41:00.000-07:002008-03-16T18:41:00.000-07:00i must admit that i am pleased with this one fact ...i must admit that i am pleased with this one fact of aging... we can see things for what they really are... as we have seen them thru and know the truth... this was a very insight filled poem,, and will provoke much thought in me as i think about it more fully....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.com