tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post115469812233625909..comments2024-02-20T19:37:39.803-08:00Comments on Average Poet: Shakerchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-5241923526307155632012-05-01T17:15:48.073-07:002012-05-01T17:15:48.073-07:00Hey RCH,
Finally got the chance to read SHAKE and...Hey RCH,<br /><br />Finally got the chance to read SHAKE and wow is all I can say...<br /><br />If it's true, you were some brave eight-year-old to go back there... if its mainly fiction, it's fantastic writing...and if it's a bit of both... it's great to see you've been able to get past the loss of innocence.<br /><br />THANKS for sharing....Mark Koopmanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03634424953074803816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-1155212472784558932006-08-10T05:21:00.000-07:002006-08-10T05:21:00.000-07:00I'm still a bit out there on painkillers(earache) ...I'm still a bit out there on painkillers(earache) to give this a proper go yet.. will return with interest thouigh.Crunchy Wetahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08326814479794858678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-1154779366414875182006-08-05T05:02:00.000-07:002006-08-05T05:02:00.000-07:00Hey Shirl, I'm glad it moved you. While peppered w...Hey Shirl, I'm glad it moved you. While peppered with a lot of factual things this a work of fiction, maybe the first of many, thanks a lot.<BR/><BR/>Hi Billy, thank you, that means a lot to me.<BR/><BR/>Hello scheherazade, good I was trying not to give too much away. I'm working on it ;^D Thanks!rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-1154738008184800582006-08-04T17:33:00.000-07:002006-08-04T17:33:00.000-07:00This had a nice build to the climax.And you totall...This had a nice build to the climax.<BR/>And you totally caught me off guard with the first plot twist. Which I think is good. I was lolling in that summer haze.<BR/><BR/>I like too the sense of forgiveness and redemption for the darkest sides of us.<BR/><BR/>I look forward to the next installment!Yasmin Waringhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15993574371849805895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-1154722167021830062006-08-04T13:09:00.001-07:002006-08-04T13:09:00.001-07:00Wow, what a beginning... fact, fiction, I don't ca...Wow, what a beginning... fact, fiction, I don't care it's still great writing.Billy Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16264147065000056960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-1154722160912503972006-08-04T13:09:00.000-07:002006-08-04T13:09:00.000-07:00Wow, what a beginning... fact, fiction, I don't ca...Wow, what a beginning... fact, fiction, I don't care it's still great writing.Billy Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16264147065000056960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-1154701273171122582006-08-04T07:21:00.000-07:002006-08-04T07:21:00.000-07:00..and the journey begins. The bridge over troubled.....and the journey begins. The bridge over troubled waters washes away and the water cleanses the soul. This feels like the first chapter and makes me want to read the book. The mother in me felt her pain that someone had hurt her child. The child in me felt your disgust and misplaced guilt and the woman in me felt the pride and strength of character in the beautiful soul that you have always displayed in your poetry. Thank you for sharing this. ShirlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com