tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post113466697102611090..comments2024-02-20T19:37:39.803-08:00Comments on Average Poet: Promptedrchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-1156175646971840962006-08-21T08:54:00.000-07:002006-08-21T08:54:00.000-07:00Most importantly SOMEONE ELSE's herds...Wonderful ...Most importantly SOMEONE ELSE's herds...<BR/>Wonderful work Rozymandiazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07891897071966903895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19075512.post-1156064087588621602006-08-20T01:54:00.000-07:002006-08-20T01:54:00.000-07:00What a cleaver structure, Bob! After reading the ...What a cleaver structure, Bob! After reading the poem, something made me relook at your rhyme scheme. That discovered couplet in the middle almost works as a form of caesura. That was very cleaver and rather effective! Great stuff Bob and with an important theme!Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.com